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short flash animation.

even thinking that could further refine how to correct the animation of hair and other parts, detailing the leftovers ede other parts and apply some effects in the transition between scenes; published to put something new in my gallery. 

if you give me courage apply some of these ideas, or just have more care with future animations

I am a complete amateur in animation, then accept all the tips you have.

INCIDENTAL MUSIC: around the world, Daft Punk
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ken1171 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
This looks like a GREAT idea for a fancy slide show - awesome job! ^___^=b
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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PenguinJ44ultra Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014
I like the stairway to heaven picture. :D
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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Yakuza55 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
my song!!
cool animation
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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Yakuza55 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome
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NeverMore-X Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student General Artist
First of all, I commend you for doing this I-don't-think-is-really-short animation. It's not easy. :D

Nice color choices on there. Love the style of the key she's holding and her tattoos. I suppose the areas I will be pointing out are either mistakes or simply your style, so please be aware that I understand some things that I may call as flaws may just be intentionally made by you.

I like the pinkish highlights on her hair but not that pink dot, it looks off. The legs, especially from below the knees, change length too much on her walk, not a biggie, a little adjustment would fix it. ^^ Perhaps to make her seem more alive, you can make her blink at some parts and make her mouth move, just a little you know.

I like the flow of the animation though, and the slow motion on every portal encounter. But to the obvious flaw for me, the background doesn't fit with her -2D against 3D. Unless of course, it was intentional, then alright.

Over all, A+ for effort and I really like it to be honest. I wish I have the courage to try animation. :meow: 

On behalf of :iconprojectcomment:
(Don't want to put this as critique -I'm shy xD)
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really appreciate your review. much of what you said I had noticed, but complemented with you more.
this was an animation of study, I am almost a layman in flash, and this work myself I thought "I'll post it anyway."
and again, thank you for your review.
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NeverMore-X Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm so glad you appreciate it :la:
Thank you too :meow:
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AngelDaniela Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
OMG, it's amazing, the animation is really awesome for an amateur, and I love the music :love:
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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AngelDaniela Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
No problem :glomp:
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BlueDragonKaiser Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Looks good to me! :D Luv dat ass!
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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ToniBo-AngelsInc Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Professional Writer
well done :thumbsup:
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Nice animation 
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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AngelicAdonis Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Damn, man! That's pretty awesome! Very well done!
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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v-zon Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
Looks great to my untrained eye!  She walks smooth, and opens the door with her arms properly. keep it up!
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tiocleiton Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this was the first publication of fact, I hope to improve with time
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